Tuesday, May 15, 2018

Earth's Meteors

Phosphorescent balls
dart between my Iai strokes:
Evening's cosmic wind.

2 comments:

  1. I am not qualified to comment, but it reads well, I think.

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  2. Thank you Linda. Even I feel like I get one right occasionally.

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