W. In CACome to the tablewith kindness over judgementBeautiful result.
Beautiful result:With kindness at the table,sorrow turns to joy.
Winds cut frightfully Sky and skin share the same hue Tears and dreams freeze fast.
Freezing tears and dreamsrun through my face and memory:Winter mocks my pain.(Nylon12, I am very impressed. Well done!)
Your response was very good TB, now if I can get knack of positioning that third line down below the second line......aaargh..
Nylon12, I cannot post in the reply function (apparently). The third line belowis not as important asthe haiku itself.
I see a bunnyIn the white stone sinking down.Spring promissory
Spring Promissory:The daffodils break awayfrom Earth's frozen grip.
Oooh...
Haiku are addictive once you get started, Becki.
Comments are welcome (and necessary, for good conversation). If you could take the time to be kind and not practice profanity, it would be appreciated. Thanks for posting!
W. In CA
ReplyDeleteCome to the table
with kindness over judgement
Beautiful result.
Beautiful result:
DeleteWith kindness at the table,
sorrow turns to joy.
Winds cut frightfully
ReplyDeleteSky and skin share the same hue Tears and dreams freeze fast.
Freezing tears and dreams
Deleterun through my face and memory:
Winter mocks my pain.
(Nylon12, I am very impressed. Well done!)
Your response was very good TB, now if I can get knack of positioning that third line down below the second line......aaargh..
DeleteNylon12, I cannot post in the reply function (apparently).
ReplyDeleteThe third line below
is not as important as
the haiku itself.
I see a bunny
ReplyDeleteIn the white stone sinking down.
Spring promissory
Spring Promissory:
DeleteThe daffodils break away
from Earth's frozen grip.
Oooh...
DeleteHaiku are addictive once you get started, Becki.
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