Saturday, June 05, 2010

New Home Afternoon

Bowed under weightless,
A plant stem touches the soil:
Butterfly takes off.

3 comments:

  1. I don't think you can actually still call it a New Home?

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  2. We've discussed this, right? It's a literary device at this point. New Home, Old Home...I'd have to do a whole post on how I'm changing the names of the two and then back edit.

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  3. Just thinking it might be a mental hurdle?

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